This is looking pretty good Aidan. I have a few suggestion for improvement - some content and others about how you are using the technology. I would be tempted to add in background music (via final cut rather than embedded in the ppt. It will be easier to do it that way and you would have greater control.) Add in music samples of the bands and artist that you talk about in the presentation and when you are talking about your video have the song playing quietly in the background. See if you can add in more short video clips as they do work well. You could add one to the slide where you talk about performance and maybe one from OK Go when you talk about them. When you talk about representation maybe you should talk about how you tried to represented the different time periods/eras. You could say that you are developing the concept of representation by going beyond gender. I think you need to talk more about why it is important to both follow and break conventions at the end.
This is looking pretty good Aidan. I have a few suggestion for improvement - some content and others about how you are using the technology. I would be tempted to add in background music (via final cut rather than embedded in the ppt. It will be easier to do it that way and you would have greater control.) Add in music samples of the bands and artist that you talk about in the presentation and when you are talking about your video have the song playing quietly in the background. See if you can add in more short video clips as they do work well. You could add one to the slide where you talk about performance and maybe one from OK Go when you talk about them. When you talk about representation maybe you should talk about how you tried to represented the different time periods/eras. You could say that you are developing the concept of representation by going beyond gender. I think you need to talk more about why it is important to both follow and break conventions at the end.
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