At one point in this prezi you say that you are 'working on it' .... The evaluation is the final stage so reword it to say what you have done!. There are a couple of times when you repeat information eg Facebook feedback and when answering the question did the audience notice things you did not. You have included your survey results but I think you need to highlight more what you did as a result of the feedback. You just talk about it in general - show specifically what you did. You also need to talk about the ancillary texts.
At one point in this prezi you say that you are 'working on it' .... The evaluation is the final stage so reword it to say what you have done!. There are a couple of times when you repeat information eg Facebook feedback and when answering the question did the audience notice things you did not. You have included your survey results but I think you need to highlight more what you did as a result of the feedback. You just talk about it in general - show specifically what you did. You also need to talk about the ancillary texts.
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