The beginning is a bit weird to watch as there is a lot going on - some stuff as intro materiel - your name, question numbers, evaluation etc as well as visuals that tie in with what you are saying. I would be tempted to have all the intro stuff happening when the song plays in the background, then start the voice over with matching visuals to make it easier to following. Some times the timing of visuals and voice seems to be a bit off - we see a new visual while you are still talking about the last one. Are there any more ways in which your video links in with the other ancillary text - I feel that this part is a bit underdeveloped. Could you add things to the website eg stills so that you can show a greater connection between them.
The beginning is a bit weird to watch as there is a lot going on - some stuff as intro materiel - your name, question numbers, evaluation etc as well as visuals that tie in with what you are saying. I would be tempted to have all the intro stuff happening when the song plays in the background, then start the voice over with matching visuals to make it easier to following. Some times the timing of visuals and voice seems to be a bit off - we see a new visual while you are still talking about the last one. Are there any more ways in which your video links in with the other ancillary text - I feel that this part is a bit underdeveloped. Could you add things to the website eg stills so that you can show a greater connection between them.
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